Monday, January 13, 2014

Her...




Girl with guitar








The moment I heard her start playing her guitar I knew what song it was. Yellow by Coldplay.
I decide to move closer so I can see the girl singing. I move to a table that was right up next to the stage. I can see her fingers strum the guitar and her lips turn into a smile as she sings on. She looks to be about a little bit younger then me,not very tall but she stands like she is. Her long dark hair is in a messy bun and her eyebrows are thick and dark just like her hair. Her skin is pale and her icy blue eyes stand out the most. I couldn't stop staring at her,I don't know why, it just seems like she is drawing me in. She notices I'm staring at her and she smiles,I turn away blushing,but turn back to her when I know she's not looking at me. She is like a work of art,the more you look at her the more beauty you see. When she is done with the song I clap my hands what seems to be the loudest clap out of everyone. I decide to walk up to the sage and throw her $10 in her guitar case. There is about 12 1's and a couple 5 dollars.
        "Thank you." I hear a soft voice say. I look up to see it was the girl who was smiling at me. When she smiles I can see her dimples in her cheeks.
     I'm speechless,my stomach feels strange and warmness fills my cheeks. I'm frozen. On stage. Just staring at her. I'm so stupid.
        "Would you like to request a song?" She asks looking at me. She must think I'm crazy.
        "Yellow by Coldplay." I swallow hard.   
         "I just sang that song." She giggles. I'm such an idiot.  "Would you like me to do it again?" She asks picking up her guitar. I nod my head and return back to my seat.
     I feel so embarrassed and stupid. How can I just freeze up like that,I've been around lots of beautiful girls. But she made me feel different,she made me feel vulnerable.

22 comments:

  1. Oh Lila, oh Lila.... THAT'S BEAUTIFUL. You are so talented!
    I love it. Teach me the ways of writing stories like that!

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    1. Really? *tears up* You are beyond sweet. I really can't stop smiling. My sister is like "Why are you smiling like that?" I'm just like "I love people." I really am not a great writer,I just started working on a story for NaNoWriMo and I haven't really worked on it for awhile. But I thought I would give it a shot and post a part of it.

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    2. YES really! I wish I could always write like you do, most of the stories you see on my blog are little bursts of ''yay-I-can-actually-write-today'' that I get a few times every month.
      And YES, Lila, post more! Post much more! Maybe I'll be encouraged to share my story, too... ;)

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    3. No No trust me,you wouldn't want to write like me. You are amazing in every little way and all your posts on your blog are so inspiring. I think you should share your beautiful talent of writing to the world,It'll make me very very very happy. Than you Madeline for all your encouraging,sweet,kind words you always know how to make me smile

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    4. No Lila I really would! And awww, you are so sweet. Awww, thank you so much. -tears up- you really are just too kind and I feel the same way about you and your blog.

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    5. *hugs you* Thank you Madeline for everything...for making me happy,for making me smile,for making me inspired,and for making me feel special. Thank you sweetie. I can never repay you for that

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  2. >.< Geesh girly! You said that I could write. But this story is just even more evidence that you can write even betta than I can. Like seriously. That was so deep and beautiful that I.... I started crying. :')

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    1. Oh my gosh,really? You made my day,cause I always feel like I'm a terrible writer but you have encouraged me to write more. Thank you for that. I really can not stop smiling

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  3. Yes dear, really! :) Awh, well I'm glad that you're going to write more! :))

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    1. I can't thank you enough,I really can't....

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  4. Wow...this is so inspiring. Excuse me, I'm going to write a post that popped into my head while reading this beautiful masterpiece. <3

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    1. Oh my gosh really? *squeals* you are way too sweet! Thank you so much! *virtual hug* I really can't stop smiling right now.

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  5. Wonderful writing ♥ The sort that stirs feelings inside.
    Tane xxx

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    1. Oh my gosh,thank you so much! You are too kind

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  6. OMIGOODNESS!!! *virtual tackle/hug* You are so So SO amazing girl! Like this is one of the best things I've ever read! You need to be an author some day and I will buy allllllll of your books :D That was so amazing, and beautiful... and FLAWLESS <333 Please post more!!!!

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    1. *giggles*Oh my gosh Brooke you are beyond sweet,you are just so amazing! I feel so special and honored right now. I really can't stop smiling,I'm going to be very very happy for a long time. When I'm sad I'll just look back on your comment and it'll make me happy

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  7. OMG, I just found your blog, and that was the best thing I have ever read on any blog for sure!!!! You go girl!! From what I've read you want to write books, well you can count on me to buy them! I followed you without hesitation!! Super excited, can't wait to read more from you! Check out my blog also. Please post/write more. http://messybits01.blogspot.com/
    Kelsi

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    1. *wipes tear away* So I go on my phone check my emails and see your comment pop up,so I check it and as I start residing it I just couldn't stop smiling. You made my day! I was like "THIS GIRL MADE MY DAY!!!" Everyone is looking at me like I'm crazy because I can't stop smiling. Thank you so much! You are far too kind and sweet. I can't thank you enough

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  8. Oh my dear, Lila. You make me lose confidence in myself when you write like that. You have such amazing talent!
    *wipes away a tear of joy* Absolutely beautiful!

    P.S. I can't wait until we're both amazing authors (and YouTubers) one day and can travel the world together! ;)

    Love,
    Sarah

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    1. Oh Sarah! *hugs you* I love you. I don't want you to ever lose confidence in yourself because you are too talented to ever think like that. Share your gift to the world! You are too kind Sarah and too sweet. You always make me very very happy.
      And I can not wait. We have places to be and people to see. We shall dominate the world with our epicness.

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